I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
Talofa lava Hope, I love how in this blog post you reflect about what you enjoyed last year. One thing I noticed that you could fix is that as I was reading this I realized that you don't add much detail. for e.g; You said that your excited to be a year 6 but maybe you could add more detail and maybe name more than in thing you are excited for.
Talofa lava Hope,
ReplyDeleteI love how in this blog post you reflect about what you enjoyed last year. One thing I noticed that you could fix is that as I was reading this I realized that you don't add much detail. for e.g; You said that your excited to be a year 6 but maybe you could add more detail and maybe name more than in thing you are excited for.
Otherwise great work. Keep it up. Ka pai,
-Edith